http://medium.com/novel-non-fiction-excerpts
I’ve started a collection on Medium.com called “Novel
& Non-Fiction Excerpts: A Place to Share and Receive Feedback on Your
Works-in-Progress.” I got the idea for this from a post on Write to Done several weeks ago in which readers were invited to
share segments of their current projects. The response was enormous – writers
not only posted their own work; they were also incredibly forthcoming with
critiques on other people’s posts.
Now I know there are plenty of writer’s forums out
there, and lots of places online where you can go to participate in discussions
and critiques of your own work and that of others. However, this experience
made me think that aspiring authors might also appreciate a less formal forum
for obtaining feedback from other writers and readers. It takes some guts,
after all, to put your work out there, particularly if you’re not sure if it’s
any good, and maybe not everyone is ready to subject themselves to the often
daunting criticism of an official group.
Anyway, I had recently discovered Medium, which,
quite accurately, in my opinion, designates itself as a site for “Everyone’s
Stories and Ideas.” Even if you’re not interested in my collection, if you’re a
writer, this is a great place to post your work. The design is simple enough –
you publish whatever you want, be it essays, short stories, poems, what have
you – and then you submit those to various “collections” that people have
started based on a variety of self-chosen themes. If the editor of a collection
likes it or thinks it’s appropriate for their set, they’ll include it, which
means a lot more exposure for your work. And, of course, you can also start
your own collections, on any theme you want – hence the subject of this post!
This also makes it a fun site for readers as well, because you can choose to
follow collections focused on specific themes – everything from “Best of
Science” to “Romance Shorts” to “Italian Football.”
The only thing I found confusing about Medium at
first is that although you can choose “recommend” for a published work if you
liked it, there’s no space for comments at the end of a piece, which seemed
odd. I did some digging around and finally discovered that their setup is
entirely different. Instead of sticking your remarks down at the bottom, it
actually allows you to make “notes” right in the margin, next to individual
paragraphs. This, of course, is an ideal setup for feedback on writing, because
you can actually comment on specific words and phrases and even point out
grammatical errors with a minimum of effort.
The other issue I should address is that Medium,
like many other newer websites, does not seem to work well with Internet
Explorer. I initially had some trouble navigating the site, and, since I’ve had
similar issues in the past, it finally occurred to me that it might be my browser.
I switched over to Firefox and voila! I could find my way around just fine.
I do hope that I’ll get the word out to enough
people who are interested in participating to make the collection worthwhile,
because if it goes over well, I think it might be helpful to start similar
collections for, say, unpublished flash fiction, half-completed research
papers, and the like. But of course that all depends on the audience.
“Novel and NonFiction Excerpts” is now accepting
submissions. I can’t wait to see yours!
In The Color of Murder by Loretta Moore a sensational murder trial brings a young African American attorney, Kevin Johnson to Briarton, Conn. to represent a black drug dealer accused of murdering a Caucasian socialite, Charlotte Knowles.
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Kevin saw Matt's hands shake as he reached for the cigarette Kevin offered him.
"Mr.Johnson, I did not kill that lady. I never even heard of her. Don't know her family, nothing. I been out here in this drug world, mindin' my own business. I admit I like gittin' high, but I ain't ever bothered nobody.
Kevin had believed in Matt's guilt, just like everyone else, but after seeing the dismay and confusion etched on the twenty-nine-year-old black man's face, he began to have doubts.
Well, this is unexpected, but I'm pleased nonetheless! Based on this brief segment, I'd say I like it so far, with the exception of the reference to Matt's age. I see where you're going here - you needed a way to establish that he's young, but not too young - but it's jarring the way you've inserted it. I'd suggest a more subtle approach - perhaps you could have the attorney looking at Matt, sizing him up. If you included a brief physical description, you could add a line such as "Probably close to thirty," which would convey the required information in a smoother fashion. I'd be happy to read more, so if you're interested, please do use the forum at http://medium.com/novel-non-fiction-excerpts. LOVE the title, by the way! :)
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